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Post by diannet on Aug 7, 2012 16:15:14 GMT -6
Aussie art critic
Revealed truth behind art
In eloquent prose
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Post by Brigid Briton on Aug 10, 2012 6:28:41 GMT -6
Hi Dianne, Unlike most haiku, which capture a moment in time, a verbal snapshot, this one leaves me wanting more information. It's a really great "hook" and I think it could be a great beginning for a longer piece.  |
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Post by eiken on Aug 10, 2012 16:22:28 GMT -6
Nice one Dianne, I love the eloquent prose, great last line. |
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Post by diannet on Aug 10, 2012 16:23:19 GMT -6
Maybe I will. I was just feeling a little sad that Robert Hughes died. I loved his writing, I was just reading his autobiography. This was all I could write.
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Post by dustandwater on Aug 18, 2012 7:51:51 GMT -6
Brigid, maybe a Haibun?
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Post by Neal Allen (snowtracks) on Aug 18, 2012 10:17:43 GMT -6
Good words, about words, about art.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 21, 2012 18:54:56 GMT -6
Hi Dianne, I like this one too, very vivid and crisp imagery...enjoyed the read |
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