Kittens (a pensee)

[Brigid Briton]

Kittens,
calico twins,
chase invisible fairies
in my sun-drenched summer garden,
fur-covered acrobats.

[diannet]

Hi Brigid, that's lovely I can just picture these lovely kittens and the fairies. Beautiful snapshot to brighten my day.

I like this form the pensee will have to have a go, in someways it's like writing a tighter gogyohka.

[Brigid Briton]

Hi Dianne,

Thanks for your comment. I must confess that these particular kittens are figments of my imagination. Wishful thinking. I would love to have a couple of kittens in my garden, but I'm already maxed out with cats here. However, just imagining this scene brought me joy. There's nothing like baby kittens at play to lift one's spirits.

I'm loving this pensee form. It is similar to a gogyohka, but, in a way, easier because the form dictates the content of every line. Almost like a recipe.

I'm looking forward to seeing one from you!