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Dec 26, 2012 5:33:39 GMT -6
Post by eiken on Dec 26, 2012 5:33:39 GMT -6
icing the Christmas cake first snow
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Dec 26, 2012 7:17:12 GMT -6
Post by Brigid Briton on Dec 26, 2012 7:17:12 GMT -6
Hi eiken, This is simply beautiful, beautifully simple. Great haiku.
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Dec 26, 2012 8:02:09 GMT -6
Post by Neal Allen (snowtracks) on Dec 26, 2012 8:02:09 GMT -6
What a magnificent image
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Dec 26, 2012 10:33:24 GMT -6
Post by eiken on Dec 26, 2012 10:33:24 GMT -6
Brigid and Neal, Thank you, I appreciate your comments. I love when I get a good juxtaposition in a haiku
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Dec 26, 2012 17:41:01 GMT -6
Post by diannet on Dec 26, 2012 17:41:01 GMT -6
very nice
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Bhavanidevi
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Mystic, Shaman, Poet and life-long student of Comparative Religions.
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Jan 12, 2013 20:30:37 GMT -6
Post by Bhavanidevi on Jan 12, 2013 20:30:37 GMT -6
This made me smile with a happy memory of Christmas, snow and cake. Good things come in threes. Well done!
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