saore
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Post by saore on Feb 19, 2014 14:55:29 GMT -6
this child
learned the language
of birds …
now he can follow
the wind with his fingers
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Post by Brigid Briton on Feb 19, 2014 15:09:56 GMT -6
Hi Sergio, This is lovely! I took the liberty of moving this from the free verse section to the Haikuland section, for obvious reasons. It's so nice to have you here on the forum!
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saore
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Post by saore on Feb 20, 2014 11:24:46 GMT -6
Thank you Brigid. It is good to be here.
Sergio
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Post by eiken on Feb 24, 2014 4:43:04 GMT -6
Oh yes, this is beautiful Love that last line in particular.
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saore
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Post by saore on Feb 24, 2014 10:58:50 GMT -6
thank you eiken. Thank you!
Sergio
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