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Post by Cory Raymond on Feb 27, 2014 16:52:21 GMT -6
a feather settles
on dusty winter ground
birds follow sun
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Post by eiken on Mar 3, 2014 13:38:51 GMT -6
Cory, I love the lost feather and the image of birds following the sun. Oh to be that bird or on a plane to the sun  |
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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 3, 2014 13:43:52 GMT -6
Must agree with eiken. Too bad most of us can't just pick up and follow the sun too!
Frigid Brigid
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Post by eiken on Mar 11, 2014 12:44:53 GMT -6
Cory, You have to keep writing haiku, you have a knack for it The sun came out in Ireland this week and the whole country has gone mad, everyone in t-shirts and birkenstocks, everyone gearing up for summer. It is only Springtime but warm sunshine in this country is like a drug, it is addictive so I am out a lot, enjoying this week of blue skies and warm sun and being by the sea is just magical when we have good weather!!!! |
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Post by Cory Raymond on Mar 13, 2014 19:42:31 GMT -6
Thanks so much for your comment, Ms. Eiken. I really love the small community of "haikunistas" here on this forum. You are definitely one of my favorites, so a compliment from you is especially meaningful!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 18, 2014 2:21:55 GMT -6
Hi Cory,
solid imagery...a very swell-crafted haiku!
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Post by Cory Raymond on Mar 19, 2014 12:46:31 GMT -6
Hi Lisa,
Thanks a lot for your comment.
Cory
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