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Post by hazelmsmith on Mar 3, 2014 13:28:12 GMT -6
I was asked this weekend by members of the Aber Valley Male Voice Choir in Wales why it is that I will travel almost 200 miles to see them in concert with regularity, and as I sat on the train coming back home, I found myself with the tune Ar Hyd y Nos (All through the night) in my head and I scribbled down the following words
From the valleys of my heartland Your music calls, Lifts my spirit when I hear you With each note that falls, Raising joy and hope within me, As your songs flow oh so sweetly, Filling my heart so completely And so I come....
To your valleys filled with music My heart is drawn, Where there's singing and there's laughter and new friendships born With you all my soul is singing, Somehow there I feel belonging, So with joyful footsteps dancing To you I come....
Maybe it's the Welsh blood in me Calls me away, Who can tell what speaks to my soul In such a way, But you folk of Aber Valley Have made my life 'sing' more sweetly And, so when your concerts call me, I'll come what may.
Hazel M. Smith 2 March 2014
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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 3, 2014 13:48:25 GMT -6
Hi Hazel, Very nice. You're sweet to commemorate the singers in this way. I like this a lot but would you consider something like "I'll be there come what may" as your closing line? After extolling their virtues, it's kind of a letdown to read that you'll only "try" to come the next time they perform. Just a thought. Otherwise, well done!
Brigid
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Post by hazelmsmith on Mar 3, 2014 14:30:54 GMT -6
Thank you for your comments, I shall think about it, I'd not thought it out obviously just wanting it to fit along the lines of the other verses
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Post by eiken on Mar 4, 2014 13:05:24 GMT -6
Lovely Hazel, music really lifts the soul and elevates the heart. Magical!!
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Post by Cory Raymond on Mar 4, 2014 13:09:10 GMT -6
Very nice write, Hazel. Music...ah...yes!
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Post by hazelmsmith on Mar 4, 2014 13:13:42 GMT -6
Thank you for your comments, I would be lost without musioc and the guys in this choir have given me so much pleasure
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Post by Fire Monkey on Mar 5, 2014 15:06:10 GMT -6
I do like this poem
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Post by hazelmsmith on Mar 5, 2014 16:52:36 GMT -6
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Post by SweetSilverBird on Mar 13, 2014 15:48:33 GMT -6
I recognized the tune immediately. Of course we know it as "All Through the Night". I loved singing your words to that song. Brilliant, sis!!! Absolutely brill! Now you have to mail them a copy! <3
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