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Post by eiken on Mar 12, 2014 5:00:04 GMT -6
a sparkle
held in each splash
this vast sea of life
I am
but a shell
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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 12, 2014 8:21:48 GMT -6
Hi eiken, If YOU are but a shell, what does that make the rest of us?  Another lovely work, this time with a twist to ponder at the end. A shell, as in someone hollow and empty of feeling, or a simple matter of fact statement of a perceived place in the scheme of things. I love it when a short line can be interpreted in more than one way. Hope you've had a lovely day so far, although with builders around, it doesn't sound terribly peaceful. Perhaps, afterwards, you can curl up with a cup of tea and a cat and write a tanka about them. |
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Post by Cory Raymond on Mar 13, 2014 19:45:33 GMT -6
Beautiful. I hope to learn a lot from you simply by ready your lovely words.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 16, 2014 9:06:27 GMT -6
beautiful writing, thanks for sharing!
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Another lovely work, this time with a twist to ponder at the end. A shell, as in someone hollow and empty of feeling, or a simple matter of fact statement of a perceived place in the scheme of things. I love it when a short line can be interpreted in more than one way.
