blackbird
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Is it enough to have the desire for greatness to be great?
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Post by blackbird on Mar 16, 2014 22:42:48 GMT -6
The Coverlet I had wrapped myself in the wreckage Like a coverlet I wore the disaster To think of myself in this regard All transgressions exposed I shudder
All relations had been cast asunder By themselves fled fast and far So caught in the web of deceit Alone I struggled, only to collapse As my life became a venture lossed Now an overwhelming pile of debris Left to block out the light Moving me to mourn and grieve A sabotaging monument to my failure As I lay at the bottom With a few pieces in my hand Moments bearing times of shine I would cling to as testimony I used to be someone Look see here.... That is me The one smiling... That was me.... I had wrapped myself in the wreckage Like a coverlet I had wore the disaster Now years later, I see the coverlet turned over Brilliant and bright are the colors Of my self respect and dignity No longer do I hold the scraps They take up a corner in a box When I need encouragement I look at the picture Of me smiling, wearing fine attire On occasion I will cry Other days I merely sigh I can't forget what lies beneath The smile and the show A girl who's dying Killing herself trying To love a man so cold I never would go back So I close the box Smooth the wrinkle in my dress Continue building and cleaning Knowing I have passed a test I am still alive
So I smile copywrite Jennifer C McLean
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John Walton
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Post by John Walton on Mar 17, 2014 23:30:47 GMT -6
Lovely imagery and some deep, dark emotions expressed here. I get a sense of someone with an inner strength though that has managed to somehow rise above the wreckage? I hope so, anyway. Well worked poem.
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blackbird
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Post by blackbird on Mar 18, 2014 1:21:47 GMT -6
Thank you John for your kind and thoughtful comment. I very much appreciate the time you took to read it and to leave your thoughts. I like to think I am above the wreckage now thank-you.
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