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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 20, 2014 19:59:36 GMT -6
noonday sun
silver cymbal
high above
crescendoing
brilliantly
before sinking
slowly to the horizon
OK, I decided to give this form a try. Thanks to Lisa for introducing us to this form in her "Violet Roses"
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 20, 2014 22:21:31 GMT -6
Hi Brigid, very well-done  it's hard to believe this is your first Whitney...excellent job! |
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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 21, 2014 8:00:54 GMT -6
Hi Lisa, Thanks for your lovely comment. Ah, well, what can I say, except that it's the haiku-head in me. I already think: "snapshot" with words, and adding a few more lines just lets me really express the image.
Brigid
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Post by eiken on Apr 4, 2014 10:21:02 GMT -6
Oh lovely one Brigid, I have not heard of a Whitney before but this is just full of imagery, sunrise and sunset, lovely |
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 5, 2014 22:01:08 GMT -6
Thanks, eiken. Why not give it a try yourself?
Welcome back!
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