John Walton
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Please check out my Blog - mylifemywordsmypoetry.blogspot.com
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Post by John Walton on Mar 23, 2014 1:25:57 GMT -6
Elefunk the Elephant
Elefunk's an elephant
whose trunk is in a knot.
He tied it to remember
something he forgot.
He then forgot about the knot
and now he wonders why
the others often laugh at him
as they go marching by!
(mylifemywordsmypoetry.blogspot.com)
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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 23, 2014 7:35:33 GMT -6
Hi John, Another very cute poem. I love to start my day with a smile and this and Minkey gave me two! Thanks!  |
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Post by Daniel Mark Extrom on Mar 23, 2014 10:34:45 GMT -6
Like it, John! Clever!
Dan
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John Walton
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Please check out my Blog - mylifemywordsmypoetry.blogspot.com
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Post by John Walton on Mar 23, 2014 11:41:38 GMT -6
I thank you!
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Post by Cory Raymond on Mar 23, 2014 15:09:38 GMT -6
Hi John,
This is so charming and the picture is adorable. I love your work!
Cory
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John Walton
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Please check out my Blog - mylifemywordsmypoetry.blogspot.com
Posts: 78
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Post by John Walton on Mar 23, 2014 16:47:12 GMT -6
Thank you Cory. You are very kind.
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Post by SweetSilverBird on Mar 28, 2014 17:18:19 GMT -6
You could write a child's rhyming book! It could be really fantastic. Especially if you get a really unique illustrator.
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