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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 26, 2014 18:18:34 GMT -6
gleaming white flowers
scattered along river bank
under morning sun
little stars twinkling in breeze
miniature milky way
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 27, 2014 0:14:24 GMT -6
a good one Brigid! I have not written a tanka in ages, I must try it again soon  |
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 6, 2014 20:50:20 GMT -6
Thanks, Lisa. The Japanese forms are some of my favorites. |
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Post by eiken on Apr 9, 2014 5:14:33 GMT -6
Beautiful imagery as always Brigid. It is lovely to see flowers sunlit, almost like little stars!!!
I have posted something on haiku but maybe you need to move it to the correct place???
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 9, 2014 5:28:46 GMT -6
Hi eiken. Thanks so much. I moved your info on haiku writing to the Form Focus section.
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saore
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Post by saore on Apr 10, 2014 6:57:37 GMT -6
beautiful tanka, I really like it.
Sergio
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