John Walton
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Please check out my Blog - mylifemywordsmypoetry.blogspot.com
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Post by John Walton on Mar 27, 2014 3:51:01 GMT -6
Haiku
Running out of time? What is a poet to do? I know! Try Haiku!
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Mar 27, 2014 13:59:46 GMT -6
Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 27, 2014 13:59:46 GMT -6
Hi John,
Very cute! While venturing far from the classic nature-inspired haiku, this one falls firmly in the category of comic haiku. I love it that you're here in Haikuland and that you're interested in exploring other forms. You have the imagination and sense of humor that are so helpful to a haiku-head. Good job!
Brigid
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Mar 27, 2014 16:11:01 GMT -6
Post by Cory Raymond on Mar 27, 2014 16:11:01 GMT -6
Yay, John! So glad you joined the haiku-heads, at last. This one made me smile. Hope to see more!
Cory
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John Walton
Junior Member
Please check out my Blog - mylifemywordsmypoetry.blogspot.com
Posts: 78
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Haiku
Mar 28, 2014 1:37:41 GMT -6
Post by John Walton on Mar 28, 2014 1:37:41 GMT -6
Thanks Brigid and Cory. It can only help to stretch ourselves and attempt something that lies outside our comfort zone. John
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Mar 28, 2014 2:39:15 GMT -6
Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 28, 2014 2:39:15 GMT -6
Hi John, you are so funny...good one
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Apr 4, 2014 12:32:55 GMT -6
Post by eiken on Apr 4, 2014 12:32:55 GMT -6
Yes, you get the comic haiku very well, excellent work.
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