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Lisa Arnold
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From Slender Thread Mar 28, 2014 1:24:43 GMT -6 Brigid Briton likes this

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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 28, 2014 1:24:43 GMT -6

From Slender Thread

from slender thread,
broken life dangles
ominous winds carry
veiled omen, hushed
screams fester within

©2014 Lisa Arnold

Hi Brigid, I was not certain if we were to use "slender thread" in our poems...I wrote this poem about a month ago, so I decided to post it

this is fun!

Last Edit: Apr 1, 2014 3:49:58 GMT -6 by Lisa Arnold

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From Slender Thread Mar 28, 2014 22:19:39 GMT -6 Lisa Arnold likes this

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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 28, 2014 22:19:39 GMT -6

Hi Lisa,

No, you don't need to use "slender thread". It just happened to be the prompt of the day. Your poem sounds really scary, like something out of H.P. Lovecraft or Poe!

I'd love to see more 5 liners from you (and everybody else!)

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding"~Nicholas Sparks

Lisa Arnold Senior Member Believe In You! Posts: 153	From Slender Thread Mar 29, 2014 3:23:41 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 29, 2014 3:23:41 GMT -6 thanks Brigid! I will post a new 5 liner soon
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 29, 2014 3:23:41 GMT -6