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Post by bluebirdspoetry2 on Mar 29, 2014 5:20:02 GMT -6
This poem was selected and published by the Sheffield City Counsel and County Libraries (UK) as their December, 2013 Poem of the Month:
Autumn Sunset Fills Every Hollow Tree's Goodnight by dr Todd Harris Autumn sunset's livery fills owl-hollows' trees age-lined trunks sport porthole's dew evergreen oaks proffer seeds' chapeaux lakeshore pathways wind rocky slews orange monarchs gild eucalyptus pages teaspoon-lofted birds' hum crimson rhyme crafty crickets legging clover stages critiquing swallows' half-moon climb bookended horizons folding shut swimming swans return ripple rings wildflower puffs crepe dandelions' cut blue eventide pages dragonfly wings shallows idle iridescent squalls silvered boats cleave crystal calm wind-shorn eddies skirt steep canyon walls aluminum bows press Poseidon's palm Fall foothills crisp-ripen cactus pears transistorized boxes choir campfire song hickory arias serenade dry-swirling airs ivory fog gusts gulls along tepidity flees cold-rinsed teapot's dome twig-nested kindle's sparking rush browns foil-wrapped corncob's golden combs grants day-caught bluegills' poaching blush tall shoulders host avian mocking cackles perching high-winged tucked-in limbs dark water guards tossed-trawling-tackle old-hat's toads toast tree-frogs' brims sleepy silence fosters starry fishing tales moon frenzied mosquitoes' quietly sup lakeside motors' pack-in rumor-rails spilling over midnight's bragging cup
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Post by Daniel Mark Extrom on Mar 30, 2014 14:51:40 GMT -6
Hi Bluebirds! It's nice to meet you!
Very nice word pictures that capture autumnal scenes well.
Question on last stanza: are "mosquitoes'" and "lakeside motor's" intended to be possessive? Not sure I get that.
Nice work! Congratulations on publishing this!
Dan
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