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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 2, 2014 9:05:12 GMT -6
Today's #orjay prompt is "New Life"
People are crying, saying good-by, the last machine unplugged. Elsewhere, she opens her eyes, begins a new life.
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Post by Cory Raymond on Apr 2, 2014 17:53:54 GMT -6
This short piece really packs a punch, Brigid. Thanks for sharing it.
Cory
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 2, 2014 23:35:40 GMT -6
Brigid, this is bold, direct and poignantly written.
it touches the heart...well-done!
hugs to you,
Lisa
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Post by eiken on Apr 9, 2014 5:16:13 GMT -6
Oh wow, two lives in five lines, incredible work. Love it and am wondering about the new life!!!
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 9, 2014 5:36:06 GMT -6
Thanks for your comments everyone. eiken, I guess we only get to find out about that new life after we close our eyes for the last time...
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