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Post by Cory Raymond on Apr 14, 2014 21:40:49 GMT -6
The horrors he’s seen aren’t suitable for anyone to view, no matter how much the generals take them for granted, or how hard the politicians try to tidy them up with patriotic brush strokes.
They are the stuff of wordless nightmares, spinning down into the yammering abyss of madness, finally smashing into the blackness of humanity without humanity.
Just short of this twenty-first birthday, he expects to receive the orders that will send him back to Afghanistan any day now.
He writes poetry to pass the time.
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Post by saore on Apr 15, 2014 7:00:01 GMT -6
Cory this is a strong poem. Nicely done. I like it, even though it is sad.
Sergio
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Post by Cory Raymond on Apr 15, 2014 8:14:37 GMT -6
Thanks Sergio. I have to wonder how many wonderful poets, writers, artists, scientists, and great generally human beings have been sacrificed on the altar of pointless war...
Cory
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 15, 2014 10:00:50 GMT -6
Hi Cory,
A powerful and sad poem. I'll be thinking about this one for a while...
Brigid
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Post by eiken on Apr 18, 2014 16:59:25 GMT -6
Cory, I was watching a program tonight on young men returning from war who never quite get over what they have experienced/seen while serving their country. It is such a sad story for so many who survive yet have to live with haunting nightmares for the rest of their days. Your poem portrays the horrors of war and the yet these men go back, time and time again. How I wish there was a peaceful solution, war is clearly not an answer. Excellent work
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Post by Reilley on Apr 24, 2014 19:11:50 GMT -6
I read somewhere that Vietnam vets who had some creative outlet skills transitioned back into the world better, increasing the re-socialization and giving a safe outlet to vent. Those who paint, or rhyme, or strum a guitar had a significantly better chance to avoid shell-shock or PTSD than those without a creative hobby.
My .02 on an otherwise thorny dilemma, and a lovely poem about it.
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