saore
Junior Member
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Post by saore on Apr 17, 2014 7:01:01 GMT -6
in la Belle Epoque of the imagination, the egg came first a box without corners, an isolated oddity
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 17, 2014 7:30:18 GMT -6
Hi Sergio,
I love poems that make me think, tickle my brain a bit. This is one of those. You have an unique way with words. Keep 'em comin'. Brigid
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 17, 2014 12:36:57 GMT -6
Hi Sergio, a very well-crafted poem, good job! thanks for posting
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Post by eiken on Apr 18, 2014 4:37:03 GMT -6
Yes, I echo Brigid's comment, this one made me think, very original tanka
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