kara
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Post by kara on Apr 20, 2014 21:27:42 GMT -6
in amber potion
blood bloomed like poppy petals
the last sign of life
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 21, 2014 8:24:26 GMT -6
Hi Kara,
I'm happy to have another haiku-head on board.
This is lovely and sad at the same time. To think that the end of a life might create some beautiful temporary art is very sad.
You have a wonderful way with words and I hope you will continue to follow the trail of breadcrumbs haiku leaves to be followed to many zen moments.
Brigid
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2014 16:04:42 GMT -6
Hi Kara  Your haiku is very well-crafted and poignant. I love the second line...thanks for posting and Welcome to forum! |
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Post by eiken on May 14, 2014 2:40:12 GMT -6
Very nice imagery |
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