saore
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Post by saore on Jun 24, 2014 10:12:13 GMT -6
undertow
there are blows in life
so powerful we just succumb
and water
pours in through our mouths
blocking our ears
there are things
we see just before drowning—
mountains, daisies,
rivers, and the bodies
of the people we have been
and the bodies
of the people we have loved
and we wonder
why
we were born human
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Post by davidwayne on Jul 27, 2014 12:27:52 GMT -6
aint it the truth
especially like the first stanza
David
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saore
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Post by saore on Aug 21, 2014 3:55:27 GMT -6
Thank you David.
Sergio
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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2014 8:59:51 GMT -6
Quite an insightful and vivid truth. Very nice Sergio.
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saore
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Post by saore on Aug 25, 2014 7:05:16 GMT -6
Thank you!
Sergio
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2014 11:06:51 GMT -6
your welcome.
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