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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2014 19:29:35 GMT -6
Through the currents they zip by tagging each other through aqua fields these little fishes glow in brilliant light they bob about in their own corners as if they've chosen real estate for themselves territory they protect earnestly. |
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Post by Brigid Briton on Aug 18, 2014 20:11:51 GMT -6
Hiya "jaja"
Welcome to the forum. This is a sweet little portrait of aquarium life (at least I assume it's happening in an aquarium due to the brilliant light reference). I've shared my home with fish for about twenty years and find them a never-ending source of amusement. A great debut!
BTW, I notice that you're in the process of getting your own forum up and running. Congratulations and good luck. Forums can be a lot of fun, provided you have the key ingredients, which are participation and exchange of ideas between poets. Wishing you lots of both.
Brigid
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2014 20:46:47 GMT -6
Thank you, Brigid for the feedback and the tips!  |
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