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Post by Amanda Moore on Mar 20, 2011 18:47:36 GMT -6
I did this one on my break at work today to throw up on Twitter ;D
Breezes carry souls
To their final destiny
Spirits on the wind
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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 20, 2011 19:05:30 GMT -6
Hi Amanda, Very pretty and "haunting"---no pun intended! Sorry about you throwing up on Twitter!  Brigid |
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Post by eiken on Mar 21, 2011 4:43:45 GMT -6
Amanda, I really like the haunting but real thoughts in this haiku. I believe the spirits are out there in the wind too, love this  |
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Post by diannet on Mar 21, 2011 21:19:19 GMT -6
A great little haiku and I believe that too, Amanda. |
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Post by Amanda Moore on Mar 22, 2011 22:54:42 GMT -6
Thanks very much the rain makes me moody!  |
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Post by Amanda Moore on Mar 22, 2011 22:55:38 GMT -6
Hi Amanda, Sorry about you throwing up on Twitter! Brigid Wuuaahhhhh! |
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Bhavanidevi
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Mystic, Shaman, Poet and life-long student of Comparative Religions.
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Post by Bhavanidevi on Jan 12, 2013 15:15:14 GMT -6
What a lovely Haiku. I think you've conveyed the feeling of the Buddhist tradition in so few words. Now that's quite an accomplishment! And the wistfulness tugs at my heart. Yes, there is the end of one life but there is hope for the spirits on the wind. More please. |
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Post by Brigid Briton on Jan 13, 2013 12:03:44 GMT -6
Hi Amanda,
you came
bringing spirited haiku
then you went away
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