Crooked poem #440

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Crooked poem #440 Mar 3, 2011 7:50:14 GMT -6

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Post by kc on Mar 3, 2011 7:50:14 GMT -6

Most of my poems have no definite titles, here is one I like quite muchly. Hope you enjoy it. <3

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Had you listened
to my serenade
yesterday

how high
the moon
and my spirits

I hanged
smiling stars in
the dark blue

the stillness of night
in my nothing but
ordinary eyes

I prepared everything
for you,
my love.

Last Edit: Mar 3, 2011 7:51:05 GMT -6 by kc

Brigid Briton Administrator Bemused. Posts: 2,407	Crooked poem #440 Mar 3, 2011 8:34:06 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 3, 2011 8:34:06 GMT -6 Ah, kc, This is lovely! You are a true romantic. Welcome to our forum, lovely lady. Brigid
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Reilley Five Star Member Posts: 506	Crooked poem #440 Mar 3, 2011 10:34:05 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reilley on Mar 3, 2011 10:34:05 GMT -6 Very evocative & romantic.
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Fire Monkey Global Moderator The Real Fire Monkey Posts: 1,649	Crooked poem #440 Mar 3, 2011 13:02:52 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Fire Monkey on Mar 3, 2011 13:02:52 GMT -6 Welcome - I look forward to more of your poems.
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