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Post by Reilley on Mar 5, 2011 11:11:38 GMT -6
Awaiting the sunrise takes some getting used to.
It is not for the faint of heart, the timid, or the love-lost. This sort of thing, first thing in the morning has been known to make grown men weep, women lose control of their emotions (again) and children take note of their surroundings.
It is yet too dark to see what I mean, but you can spend this idle time rubbing the sand from your eyes, and preparing your metaphors. How many ways do you know to say ‘quicksilver’? You will likely need them all before you are done.
This time of year it rises later, so you have a brief moment to form a game plan, if that is your nature.
It is not mine.
When the time is right, and not before the sky erupts in silent resplendence - a strip tease in reverse; every passing second fulminating in yet another color unimagined, another transitional hue that was as fleeting as it was celestial.
And only when the sky and your imagination have reached the saturation point does the blaze pierce the horizon, forcing you to look away, pushing the eyes anywhere else but the majesty, godlike in its refusal to be stared at.
Palpable light washes over the morning and roosters crow, birds take up harmonies, and the world itself evangelizes.
Night gathers her shadowed skirts and sits aside once more, as she must, for aurora shines, even through clouds, whether we see it or not.
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Post by Fire Monkey on Mar 5, 2011 18:29:46 GMT -6
Very good read - I love the idea and you executed it perfectly.
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Post by SweetSilverBird on Mar 5, 2011 21:21:58 GMT -6
I agree, you captured a breathtaking moment and put it on display again for us here.
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Post by JanetGunn on Mar 6, 2011 12:50:47 GMT -6
Beautiful poem! You give us such strong and beautiful images.
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