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Post by Cory Raymond on Mar 13, 2014 19:46:34 GMT -6
snowy egret
slow-mo stalks
darting minnows
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Post by Brigid Briton on Mar 13, 2014 21:41:23 GMT -6
Hi Cory, I've been meaning to tell you how happy I am to have another haiku-head here on the forum. I've been enjoying your haikus very much. I love the use of "slow-mo". It probably wouldn't be embraced by haiku purists, but it sums up the way an egret walks exactly. I'm glad to see that you've been commenting on a variety of other people's work. That's what we're all about here---interacting. (Well, there's poetry too...)  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 16, 2014 9:04:20 GMT -6
Hi Cory,
I enjoyed this much, good job!
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