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Post by Gwen Dubeau on Apr 1, 2014 9:10:07 GMT -6
 Last years peeps filling sweet air amidst blue skies no cares. You hatched you grew you flew New life displayed among branches safe from lurking eyes hungry stomachs sharp teeth Safety found high above ground A new family will come raising each one new day, new way Refresh revise renew Life in full circle. By Gwen Dubeau Attachments:
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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 1, 2014 9:26:14 GMT -6
Very nice, Gwen. I am inspired by your message of renewal. Is that your own photo of the nest?  Brigid |
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Post by Daniel Mark Extrom on Apr 1, 2014 15:56:46 GMT -6
Hi Gwen! Nice to meet you!
Well done! Captures one of the first signs of spring.
I have a question: The last line "By Gwen Dubeau": I actually read it as part of the poem, since it is almost a rhyme with "renew." Was it intended that way, as if, sort of encouraging yourself to "refresh revise renew"?
Just wondering.
Dan
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Post by Cory Raymond on Apr 2, 2014 17:51:51 GMT -6
Hi Gwen,
"Peeps" reminds me of the marshmallow Easter chickens. Yummy! I enjoyed this. BTW, welcome to the forum. It's nice to see a new face (not that there is anything wrong with the "old" faces!).
Cory
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