U.V. Lite

[Sphinx]

U.V. Lite 
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Ultraviolet lines

tattoo the mind's eye

demonstrating  cause and effect 

a semiconscious mine that propagates rhymes 

our heightened consciousness might affect ~

[Daniel Mark Extrom]

Hi Sphinx,

I usually don't "get" short poems because I'm too literal, and so I struggle with them. As such, I always think there's something that I'm not "getting" that the rest of the world gets, and then I feel stupid and inferior and need medication.

But I think I "get" yours, though now you might feel that I'm insulting you, since if I get it, it's too easy to "get"!!! 

Oh, I have problems, and I'm spreading them! 


Anyway, I did like this. The conscious mind might well interfere with the rhyme. I like that.

And I truly hope I got it, at least in part!!

Welcome to my neurotic world!

Dan

[Spinx]

Thanks, Dan. 

You are a gentleman and a scholar.

[Brigid Briton]

Hi Sphinx and welcome to the forum,

This is a colorful debut, to be sure.

You apparently forgot to log back in before responding to Dan's comment. Therefore, you show up as a guest in that comment. Just to keep things from getting confusing, it's a good idea to log in before you respond to a comment. Otherwise, the forum software isn't able to correctly keep track of the number of posts you make as a member.

Thanks.

Brigid

[Sphinx]

Brigid,

Thanks for the warm welcome. You have a quite a home here. In the future I will do as you have suggested.

[Reilley]

I loved the whimsical wordplay in this one.

[Sphinx]

Thanks, Reilley.