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Post by Brigid Briton on Apr 19, 2014 21:00:08 GMT -6
Very pretty, Lisa. So evocative of loneliness...
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Post by kara on Apr 23, 2014 3:05:52 GMT -6
i am really liking your poems lisa! i find myself thinking about this woman trying to empathize with her. is she disappointed about the weather, or is she at peace in the cafe, alone. i don't think it sounds so bad, for me personally... i'm sure someone will come warm up her coffee soon at least! she probably likes her coffee black or there would be cream in it  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 15, 2014 11:53:52 GMT -6
Very pretty, Lisa. So evocative of loneliness... thanks so much Brigid  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 23, 2014 9:51:42 GMT -6
i am really liking your poems lisa! i find myself thinking about this woman trying to empathize with her. is she disappointed about the weather, or is she at peace in the cafe, alone. i don't think it sounds so bad, for me personally... i'm sure someone will come warm up her coffee soon at least! she probably likes her coffee black or there would be cream in it I like your take on my poem Kara...when I wrote it I thought she was seeking a p;ace to escape the loneliness for a few hours but still fins herself alone...thanks for the read and comments |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 6, 2017 23:47:40 GMT -6
sorry, I had to delete the post because it is being considered for publication and cannot appear online
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